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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2005-10-10 07:46 PM



Hi, I'm back again.
You see, it is the atmosphere, again ...
Even through closed windows
It still penetrates the house.
I stepped out, bare-chested in the cold,
and fell under the influence ...
Something about a snowfall ..
Something snow does to clean the air ...
The cold, sweet, frosty scent of winter,
The scent of Heaven in the Colorado snow ...
The cold, sweet, frosty clear
Off frigid Rocky Mountain air ...
What if is just
an over-active imagination?
what if it's just so much silly twaddle?



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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-10-10 08:13 PM


Jaime,
Naw. No twaddle. I'm pretty sure.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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2 posted 2005-10-10 08:20 PM


If it's twaddle, I sure like it!  Thanks for transporting me across the miles for a moment.  Very refreshing!

     miscellanea

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-10-10 09:46 PM


LOL I heard it was 20 inches worth of snow twaddle. Hope you stayed inside and warm today!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-10-10 09:52 PM


Jaime ~

Thanks! I needed that! Reading your poem energized me and was like a breath of fresh air!

Love & Light,
Linda

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