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ecrivan
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0 posted 2005-10-10 03:26 PM


A separating of ways
separation at a party
with a solid group
around the wife
few supportive chums
around the man


what the cause was
lost importance
set off the storm
as it were
to then reunite
created other standards
the dos and don'ts
measure for measure
in inclement weather


a separating of ways
a succession of romance
parted for lack of understanding
too much drama on one part?
too much freedom for the other!




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1 posted 2005-10-10 03:29 PM


Most happen years before they occur....and some of the most complete are never completed. Either way, any way...tragedy to the most microscopic detail.

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2 posted 2005-10-10 03:50 PM


i have felt this and feel it.
bernie

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3 posted 2005-10-11 08:35 PM


sometimes just not enough on either side..

interesting when put into words

Jenn

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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-10-12 09:02 AM



Sad ~ but so often true...


EA

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-10-12 11:39 AM


sometimes the best part of both worlds are just not enough....yanno?

Enjoyed, in a bittersweet understanding way.

wordwizard
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6 posted 2005-10-12 03:58 PM


yes there is the family to consider in a big way


ecrivan
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7 posted 2005-10-13 12:47 PM


so much od divorce starts before it actually happens, true Ratleader and so much decline in friendship happens before friends go their separate ways too.


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-10-14 07:04 PM


I used to think it was too easy to get a divorce, but now I think its too easy to get married...to many get married for the wrong reasons...I certainly did...and am now divorced...James
ecrivan
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9 posted 2005-10-14 10:16 PM


divorces that I hear about are lingering and complicated...


peppermint35
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10 posted 2005-10-19 03:46 AM


Very thought-provoking, as per your usual...
been through this and fortunately, enough time has passed that the marriage is over but the friendship is back!!!

Pepper
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wordwizard
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11 posted 2005-10-20 04:58 PM


Sometimes the branches have to shake for the fruit to fall  


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