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Open Poetry #36

salza with tin-nitro

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-10 07:58 AM

make for me your canary soup oh dawn
fly your feathers of golden amber there
above my rubber tire'd windows

and jauntywalk my bedsheets asphalt
that decorate your salza sided sky
with lemon memory in memorex

and potato chips the long day kind
that burn my lips when I sing
and you laugh at my fingers

drawing smiles on car hoods
below the bullet holes
of another's vulgar laughter

give me more to drink of your wine
there are only hours left in our lives
but no minutes of of sober value

just the metal mouths of a desert heat

___________

dark

scribnote..desert heat is a scooter event in palm springs every year..big bores, broken doors, no snores (sleepless)oh and naughty girls too..a bit of a party atmosphere

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-10-10 08:13 AM

and jauntywalk my bedsheets asphalt
that decorate your salza sided sky
with lemon memory in memorex

~*~

This has a tasty sound all around...

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2005-10-10 09:11 AM

Sassy ... tangy ... and oh so colorful ... fun fun fun.

Smiling here with enjoyment.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-10-10 01:01 PM

DS

You reminded me of my sweet canary long gone.
In the room the table
is heavy
legs folded and tucked

The canary sings in its center
he tells the sun the time
singing to the yellow sash of the eastern curtain
--------
"make for me your canary soup oh dawn
fly your feathers of golden amber there
above my rubber tire'd windows"

Love the color you painted into your poem!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-10-10 02:32 PM

a party atmosphere...watching behind the scenes

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