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Open Poetry #36

Jumble Sale

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-09 02:42 PM

With a toss of hair your eyes grew wider as if you ever knew

Deep within your soul you saw reverse of feeling yet still there raw

You with a distainful shake of head

Wondered where courage was bred

You walked away with your sense of world

Of feeling direction and outside the herd

You walked on pavements filled with cracks

You noted those that went and didn't come back

Or those were many strains of thought

One made it through as a King of resort

You never turned your head as you walked away

You swayed and walked into another day

You left an image I can still recall

Perhaps like a mental jumble sale

You have them all

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2005-10-09 03:04 PM

Hey Bodger, I really like this one.

:-)

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-10-09 03:35 PM

Thanks Froggy

I need to edit the Critques stuff - something is missing from there

You are an old romantic Froggy

Blazing Saddles

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2005-10-09 09:59 PM

"Or those were many strains of thought"

This made me think and I enjoyed your recall...interesting write.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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