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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-10-08 11:41 PM



Look Into My Eyes

Allright, so I did
want to hold you
tight every night,
and I know that
you tend not to be
all that socialable.
So what else is new,
I can be antisocial too.
So...no more kisses
on want you lips,
no more nights of
wanton bliss,
just one last look
into my eyes,
while I say
goodbye.

JamesLee
October07
2005
This is not
a current event...

© Copyright 2005 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2005-10-09 01:39 AM


I love this...

geesh...its great to read your writing

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-10-09 12:34 PM


Silly girl! She should look into her Island Man's eyes!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-10-09 01:49 PM


Just the local news James

and that is a joke

Take care

Bodger

Janette
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4 posted 2005-10-09 10:02 PM


Ohhh the wants and ifs one can long for....

Great read here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

froggy
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5 posted 2005-10-09 10:06 PM


I agree with everyone before me
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-10-13 02:21 AM


Thank you Temptress, Eath Angel, Bodger, Janette and froggy for the nice responses...James
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7 posted 2005-10-13 06:45 PM


Very nice.
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