Open Poetry #36 |
A lovers plea |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
my heart, my love, please tell me that you love me the same, be with me this one instance, and let here it be heard , your silence reveals nothing, that I don’t know, this feeling leaves me raided, on your lips are my kisses, Somehow they are ill gotten, don’t push me away like a pest, just look in my eyes, and see the pain that is there, without you in my future, my soul will cease to be. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness! Sounds like someone has been bitten by the love bug! Well done. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Souls never really cease to be at least I don't think so. I love this. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"don’t push me away like a pest," I feel your troubled spirit's lament. And your plea is so romantic ... how can she push you away? always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This poem was written after we already broke up. Thanks for your support though. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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