Amor de Callado Sombre [a bit of something old...]

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-10-07 07:22 PM

Amor de Callado Sombre
(Love of Silent Shadows)

Husk of twilight filtered rare,
Grains of gold in blend with time,
Grapes have twined and ever bear
This love of silent shadows clime.

Hear the hush beneath the roar
From this beating of my heart,
Like an ocean's bounty, shored,
This love of silent shadows impart.

Slowly the misty fog enshrouds
The sands and lands and all of time,
Hiding us in the grayest clouds,
This love of silent shadows finds

The all of me now supplicant
To the soul who has captured me,
Now enjoined in sweet content
This love of silent shadows' reverie.

Break not this spell, this turn so fine,
But let it linger within your heart,
And taste again these lips of wine
Drink deep lest silent shadows depart.

Sharksbean
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jax

1 posted 2005-10-07 07:36 PM

nice write thanks for sharing the lovely piece

-may the force be with you in poetry

Martie

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2 posted 2005-10-07 07:42 PM

Sissie....how very beautifully you wrote of this love...!!

SmartChick
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3 posted 2005-10-07 07:54 PM

Oh Karilea, this is just beautiful.

Skyfire

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4 posted 2005-10-08 01:22 AM

I love the way you use words

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2005-10-08 06:23 PM

Slowly the misty fog enshrouds
The sands and lands and all of time,
Hiding us in the grayest clouds,
This love of silent shadows finds

smiling here....'this love of silent shadows finds' oh yes, that it does

mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Magnus

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6 posted 2005-10-08 08:04 PM

You go Kid........well done...a nicely done
piece of the past!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-10-08 08:45 PM

Excellent write Karilea...
so much enjoyed.
Love ya lady~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Nightshade

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just out of reach

8 posted 2005-10-08 09:06 PM

Well now....where did this keeper come from?!! Wonderful Karilea. hugs, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2005-10-08 09:50 PM

I love the soumd of this, It's one of those poem that sounds wonderful when read aloud.
Take care!
Liz

SoundWaves
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10 posted 2005-10-09 11:05 AM

Nice write!!!

The spotlight can only get brighter.

Bodger
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11 posted 2005-10-09 02:45 PM

You are getting superb Sunshine

Bodger

LeeJ
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12 posted 2005-10-10 07:59 AM

This write, enables one to view the depth of chapters in your heart, that are endless and equally awesome…this gave the reader a sense of great peace, guidance, and a feeling music in the background….

kayjay
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13 posted 2005-10-10 08:27 AM

Beautiful words. You do find the finest phrases. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

iliana
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14 posted 2005-10-12 02:07 AM

Karilea, this is so beautiful, also mysterious and holds some notes of blue. Much enjoyed, SIL.

.....jo

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