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Open Poetry #36

Tired

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

0 posted 2005-10-07 06:28 PM

I'm holding on,
barely
but I'm here.

I'm gonna fall,
fall back down there.
It's just too cold,
for me up here.

I can hear them calling,
promising,
me everything.

I'd walk away.
if I felt anything.
They'll strengthen me,
cause I'm enfeebled.
They'll bring me back
to sanity.

Fall away
I must fall away.

I've surrendered to the,
tranquility.
It's what I need,
And it's close to me.

Desire is,
everything that they can give.
Don't want to chose
to live, I'll fall down.
It's what I need,
to be freed,
Don't insult me here.
Just let me be,
alone and dismal.
I've surrendered here
alive and humble.

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-07 07:39 PM

beautiful poem thank you for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2005-10-07 11:22 PM

a Humble heart is always a good one

~Enjoyed your poetry

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

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