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...Tears...
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...Tears... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 "Tears seem like a waste unless someone sees them," I said as we drove through rain covered streets in the dark You reach over taking my hand I watch the rain fall on the windshield matching the shapes of my tears. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This played out in my mind's eye as a sad scene from a black and white '50s movie... You certainly were able to paint a somber picture with your poet's brush. A delicate touch you have, Dear Poetess.  EA |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ohooo… this is so sad, but so very good.  JL |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A sad heartfelt poem Tinker. But beautifully written. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww...this reminds me of that scene in Bridges of Madison County....her in the truck with her farmer husband and Clint there in the rain....  Oh, sorry..just overtired from babysitting I guess. This is just lovely Teed. Love the gif !! Hugs & Miss Ya !!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tears doseem like a waste of time, at times... and at other moments, such a blessed release.... for this, baby... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such strong lines to tell a deep story in so few words. Great illustration. Hugs Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
rain has a way of doing that lending itself to the mood or does it paint the mood? nice portrait youve painted here |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I can't think of a better way to cleanse. It's always nice to be loved at the hardest times. I sure like the way you write, lady. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Poignant ! Elicits a memory from me ... I used to hide my tears (many years ago) ... but came to realize that they were, and are, such an important barometer of feeling that others should share ... how else could they know that at the very moment of their falling, I need ... that tender touch of someone who knows that they fall for me~ Thank you, sweetie ... I love this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"You reach over taking my hand" This line was endearing to me for tears are always softened with a loving touch. Your writing invokes memories for me ... excellent write here Dear Lady. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Enjoyed the read. The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you all for reading and replying to my post. It is my selfish pleasure to read your responses. ~Smiles, Hugs & Love, Nancy~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is such a sad poem. But, beautiful. |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
thanks for sharing, i really like it |
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