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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Party in one room litigation in another give and take birthday cake aglow candle about to be blown out when the wind of argumment hits The occasion was supposed to be a blast best wishes then carefully cast candle blown by a gust of wind guests part on the wake of verbal storm the cord of give and taken tightens contrasts hightened. [This message has been edited by wordwizard (10-07-2005 07:03 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice one. Reminded me of the old Perry Mason shows. I could hear the music as I read.  JL |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
thanks for the feedback but just completed the poem |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very picturesque poetry |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this might sound vain but here it goes A picture may paint a thousand words his words paint thousands of pictures |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this might sound vain but here it goes A picture may paint a thousand words my words paint thousands of pictures |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
reminds me of all to oft, the story of a child's life.... sad but true... adding, well executed write... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
his words paint thousands of pictures I like that.. your words sort of remind me of a day eventually to come when I will have a party...a divorce party with all our friends invited... ~smiling~ for no apparent reason...yet M |
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