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Old woman vs. Old Man
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Old woman vs. Old Man |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA 
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 What a funny picture of how old people can have fun by going on a bicycle riding up above the hills lump While riding the bicycle the lady had her butt up when the man in the front had his chin up Making a funny face While riding through and through This is a funny picture The background is awesome I feel like as I look at this My face just turns into a possom Poetry can get you very far |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So many thoughts in this picture. Funny is as funny does…. ??? True love? The Martyr? Man and his funny machine… ‘Don’t stop now… You are doing just fine.’ Good one  JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this Laura.. You can see so many stories in a pic eh? Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my gosh! I nearly blew a gasket when I saw the picture! LOL I can see how you were inspired! ~ and I am glad that you were! Your poem was gave me some more laughs! Thanks for the haha! ~ I mean, HAHA! hahaha!  Loves 'n laughs, EA |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
omg, this was funny Laura. peace! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
He He A real "Up Hill Battle" |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
for someone who says she feels like a possom you sure dont look it. if anything you look like a cat(thats a compliment by the way)this was cute thanks for sharing   purr-may the force be with you in poetry [This message has been edited by Sharksbean (10-07-2005 07:31 PM).] |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Angel-H "While riding the bicycle the lady had her butt up when the man in the front had his chin up Making a funny face While riding through and through" Indeed, well said.... Perhaps the picture depicts the yin and yang spirit also... The woman looking down and back at the gold of the past (at the end of the rainbow) she, clinging to the man who sometimes foolishly charges into the future, up the hill.. them both balancing the bike (life) You have written a fun poem... I enjoyed it, and the picture. -----------ice ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelheart Thank you for the first laugh of the day. |
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Poetryatheart Junior Member
since 2005-10-05
Posts 16Jax, FL |
LOL I was like crackin this lackin.. I mean bless the old mans heart. I mean He was carrying a fat woman, that would of just make me get off the darn thing .. lol good write. hope, love, is the value of poetry |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This poem was so funny I about killed over with laughter. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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