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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-10-07 12:50 PM



Twice As Lovely


Together as we hiked
on the nature trail
I realized that another
one of my dreams had
found the way to come true.

To walk among wood and
meadow with my sweetheart,
the trail twice as lovely
when walked by two.


JamesLee
October07
2005

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-07 07:54 AM


that's a matter of opinion and personal prefrence, but...I must say, your happiness is your wealth, and so....go for it my friend...

I remember to, a time with another at Hawk Mountain...the autum colors, brilliant with eyes wide open...and so, yes, Michael...be there in every vital motion of life.

Wonderfully written

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2005-10-07 10:45 AM


JamesMichael, this is a beautifully painted picture. I love the sentiment. Thank you for starting my day the right way!

SG

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-10-07 11:27 AM


"To walk among wood and
meadow with my sweetheart,
the trail twice as lovely
when walked by two."

~ Oh yes, indeedy!

Aloha hugs to the romantic Island Man!
Linda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2005-10-07 11:57 AM


I have to agree with your sentiments here but sadly many prefer to walk alone these days.  It's a pity.
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2005-10-07 01:11 PM


JamesMichael:

Very nice write.  Enjoyed the picturesque frame of mind displayed.


JL

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