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Mourning Becomes Herself
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Mourning Becomes Herself |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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With all of her thoughts Praise for her world At an end Once again she finds herself Alone Forced to face the night Thinking Always thinking There is more for her Thoughts the world is holding Hostage In the end The solidified edge of reality She finds the solace She has been waiting for In the arms of another man Forgetting the pain Left upon her By the last one along When all is said |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
good write thanks for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and perhaps, mourning the morning after ~the elusiveness, of true solace |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thinking always thinking... ~*~ I know this... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
almost like the poet is standing there, watching her every move...like Phanotom of the Opera... enjoyed |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed this Ringo bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thanks everyone for reading and replying... and my sincerest apologies for not responding earlier. When all is said |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
never given a chance to heal from the last battle . . . nicely written, is good to see you posting. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
any port in a storm?  Your writing grows m'friend. I very much enjoyed this.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
all too true! good writing. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue... I thank you for bringing this back and replying to it... It's great to see you on the pages, no matter how infrequently. And you are always so kind. Karen- And who would know more about storms?? Thank you agaion, m'dear. It is so great to see you back. iliana- Thank you for replying. I am so glad you enjoyed it. |
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