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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2005-10-06 12:54 PM


Seriously Speaking

It happend so quickly
Your words and your expressions
so serious

I started to laugh
the more you spoke
the more I laughed

You looked at me with envy
and you too
started to laugh

the sound of our laughter
only catapulted us further
into a fit of glee

my eyes started to tear
and you held your stomache
as we continued our laughing frenzy

in that moment
we were so bonded
you said "come on now, you're driving me crazy.
This is too funny, you're crying, I'm dying"

"Ok I said, stop making me laugh and I'll stop crying".

"I can't he said, because you are making me laugh."

and then
he kissed me...


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-10-06 01:33 PM


SimplyGold~
You just flooded me with a deluge of memories~

Thank you !!!

I love this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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2 posted 2005-10-06 01:52 PM


Awwww...what an awesome moment captured for us to enjoy! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2005-10-06 01:52 PM


Thank you Marge, I'm glad that it brought you back to those sweet times.

SG

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2005-10-06 01:54 PM


Nightshade,

I'm smiling, thanks.

SG

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5 posted 2005-10-07 12:06 PM


SG, I love this! Absolutely love it!

From one gigglepuss to another, I KNOW what you so adorably wrote about! A delightful read which brought such moments back to me as well!

~ and to have it sealed with a kiss, is 'simply' perfect! Flirty

Loves 'n Laughs,
EA

Martie
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6 posted 2005-10-07 12:08 PM


I loved this!!  Makes me want to do it too!  
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-10-07 12:46 PM


Reminding me of my first girlfriend...when I would try to kiss her she would start giggling and it would ruin the whole mood...James
SimplyGold
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8 posted 2005-10-07 10:36 AM


Hi EA,

I can see you giggling. I'm glad that I have been able to tickle the memory of these special moments of joy. I especially enjoy when the memory is shared.

,
SG

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9 posted 2005-10-07 10:42 AM


JamesMichael,

I love your reply, great memory. Reminded me of my very first kiss. He was a little redhead. He tasted like Bazooka bubble gum.

SG

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10 posted 2005-10-07 10:43 AM


Martie,

Do it! Make me laugh again too!


SG

JL
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11 posted 2005-10-07 01:04 PM


Sounds like a movie trailer.  Liked!!


JL

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