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Ineptness |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Ineptness Within the jaws of ineptness I spiraled onto the ground And there on the stage of redress I bowed to the clap of the sound They waited for the sigh of cry The broken wings the turn of bend To see a bird that could not fly Now bound to earth until the end There in the utterance of a moan I wrapped myself within its sheath And placed my foot upon deaths stone To let myself the stage beneath But one more look I could not stay To turn my eyes to see once more The rainbow where the treasures lay The place where lies forevermore I know this life is but a phase And ineptness my veil of daze |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It is a wise and stong soul that can admit ineptness... Good Morning Sy, thank you for the view this morning.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
There is no ineptitude in your words Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...I should be so inept! Mornin' T-Man!  EA |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
He whose eyes are fixed on immortality understands the bonds of mortal men. Great write Seymore, as usual. :-) |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
You amaze me with your ability to always find just the right words to form not only your thoughts but also your rhymes of perfection. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Inept my foot!!  Not our Seymour ! Enjoyed this unique write. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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