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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-10-06 01:36 AM



Bucketfulls pouring,
like rain, falling,
cascading into your heart,

Dripping down,
An Iv into your soul,
vitamins for happiness,

Sun begans to shine,
love gives eyes to the blind,
an eternal fountain of youth,

Life dependancy,
loves addiction,
a hearts prescription.

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2005-10-06 05:42 AM


I think a lot of people would line up a long way for this kind of prescription...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-10-06 07:56 AM


It is an expensive prescription, are you shure you can afford it...LOL...I think you need it , it is the cure you have been looking for?

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
3 posted 2005-10-06 02:30 PM


I really like this poem. I especially like the last line. It's beautiful.
Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
4 posted 2005-10-06 02:35 PM


you write some of the loveliest poetry i have ever read thank you

-may the force be with you in poetry

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