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Grasping |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Loves'grip squeezes, breath escapes me, deeper the longing becomes, Oh, God, I LOVE YOU!!!, I love you so much, with every fiber of my being, I desire nothing more, than to feel your touch, I am insane with madness, Loves' clasp, clings, tightly grabbing my heart, pulling me ever toward you, Oh, My love, My heart, can you not see love, when love is before you?, End this suffering, stop this pain, come, tear these walls apart, Tightening the grip, even farther, your hands around, bound, unto my heart. "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Maybe you need to calm down a little after writing this poem ARH, you will spontaneously combust if you are not careful!!!...LOL...a fine write and do you know what?...Somehow i feel a lot of passion in this piece....dont ask me why...but i feel it...LOL...well done...thank you ... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well maybe I will just burst all over you? You are so sweet to say such words... Smiling  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hehehe, sure hope you don't burst open, ARH! |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
I found that to be very ravishing, it moved me, and put me in an upbeat mode, which I haven't seen in a while, so thank you! |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Could U write this to me? Make my day in a dream like state, if it were but true, Lucky dude to be the subject of such attention as U. No doubt, great poem Afterall you perked up the chemical dude That’s saying something |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All I can say is silky...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the Insanity of it all .... !!! a grasping write!  CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa, this one is gripping, you should send this to him... great write |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Powerful, passionate, 'gripping',...your element, ARH. CG |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnhhh ... J |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
good to see you back posting....and what a beautiful post ARH..... love looks good when you say it... |
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