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exhale
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0 posted 2005-10-06 12:36 PM


isn't this the part
when we collapse

the mountain is crumbling before me
my eyes aren't open yet
the dust hasn't settled yet
there's still truth in my eyes
but can you find it
through all the rubble
just look past the wreckage
there's still a person there
the breakdown
is coming

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-10-06 08:59 AM


sending you hugs and prayers, that you will allow nothing but nothing to stagnate time, nor get in your way....

Hugs
Lee J.

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-10-06 09:55 AM


Been there, done that.
Take life by the horns and have fun !!
Time goes by so quickly and we are left kicking ourselves for missing a single moment. Be good to yourself. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Obsidian Snow
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since 2005-08-24
Posts 88

3 posted 2005-10-06 09:56 AM


Your words convey a huge sense of pain.  Well done.
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