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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-10-05 01:59 AM



And if at night
I look out across the sea
Who’s to say there’s not a ship
That waits for me

And on its deck
Someone forgotten while I am here
Who knows the way among the stars
And who I am beneath it all


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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
1 posted 2005-10-05 02:07 AM


That is so lovely.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-10-05 07:04 AM


And if at night
I look out across the sea
Who’s to say there’s not a ship
That waits for me
who's to say~~~

M

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
3 posted 2005-10-05 09:25 AM


very nice write thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-04-25 04:56 PM


nobody should. life to be judged only by God.

beautiful and firm

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