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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-04 07:08 AM



I remember the coffee of you
and your candy store holy
when you had all the streets
meet at your square sided hollow

you were the vanilla of evening then
with some dawn on your see-thru
and short skirt flirty often too
with a taxi comfort close enough

I remember the sand times there
when you were cobblestones
and you begged me to polish you
with the dandy handyman of my broom

and we played music in the park of you
slow songs that made our blood warm
and you were a drinking fountain laughing
the kind with no handles to turn

and I was always waiting to be willing


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dark

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-04 07:22 AM


it's nice and comfy to look back and remember, then to, to look ahead, and know where we've come b/c of those moments....

nice lamplight of memory.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-10-04 08:19 AM



And now I need some vanilla
for my coffee...

if nothing else, to swirl some shadows
between the dark layers...

Do you have a second helping today, Sir?

Martie
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3 posted 2005-10-04 11:59 AM


DS

"and we played music in the park of you
slow songs that made our blood warm
and you were a drinking fountain laughing
the kind with no handles to turn"

You are so handsome clothed in poetry!!  



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2005-10-04 12:31 PM


Dark Stranger
Put this in a bottle and drop it in the ocean. Enjoyed

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2005-10-04 01:45 PM


awwww you guys are too much..thanks to each of you..you bless me beyond my blabability.

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