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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-10-04 12:30 PM



Yaki Sushi Nori

Yaki Sushi Nori
helps to tell the story
of my honeys love
for roasted seaweed.
On stove top
she heats it up,
stuffs it into her mouth
and eats it up,
finishing off
ten sheets
before she's done.
Once she heats it,
I like to watch
her eat it,
as contentment
finds a new place
upon her sweet face.

JamesLee
October03
2005
Yaki Sushi Nori
is roasted seaweed.
10 sheets=100 calories
with 0 calories from fat.
She's got me eating
seaweed now.

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-10-04 12:36 PM


Moderator...help me...I only want one of these posted, not two...James
yv
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2 posted 2005-10-04 12:58 PM


Aah...how lovely!  The was beautiful...intimate...wonderful!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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3 posted 2005-10-04 01:40 AM


shelling shrimp

heaven
and
earth
and
every
thing
in
between

oh

she says
shelling shrimp

she says this
removing the thinnest purple of their veins
later
rinsing her hands under the faucet
my mother calls everyone to the table

eat
she says
pushing her hair back with
a wet hand
eat

and we do


Thuy Le

Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-10-04 08:33 AM


LOL..this is cute James..
May but low in calories but how does seaweed taste?
Hugs~Nancy

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-10-04 09:08 AM


Now that is a man who appreciates and adores his woman!

Precious write, Island Man!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-10-04 07:25 PM


Thank you yv, Huan Yi, Enchantress and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...
Huan Yi that is a touching poem...
Enchantress, the way that yaki nori is processed, into flat sheets, it is tasty,
as far as eating seaweed straight from the ocean, I don't know if I could handle it...James

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