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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-10-04 12:01 PM


Tis fear my love

To think,
How fear can halt the stars
And keep the sun from shining

Life's a scary movie
Sometimes people do die
Or even lose a limb

But to live a life a lie...
One cannot truly know
About life’s small story...
If one shuts their eyes
Through all the scary scenes.

Even so...
I can't help but notice
Everything I can't let go


Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

© Copyright 2005 Juju - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-10-04 12:13 PM


Nice writing...James
iliana
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2 posted 2005-10-04 12:15 PM


"One cannot truly know
About life’s small story...
If one shuts their eyes
Through all the scary scenes."

Very true, Juju!


ctowen
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3 posted 2005-10-04 12:39 PM


a beautiful piece....

    well seen by open eyes!


  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2005-10-04 12:31 PM


If one shuts their eyes
Through all the scary scenes."


sometimes I have to remind myself of this~~~

M

Sharksbean
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jax
5 posted 2005-10-04 01:12 PM


this is good poetry thanks for shairing keep it up

-may the force be with you in poetry

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-10-04 01:38 PM



"To think,
How fear can halt the stars
And keep the sun from shining"

~ Yes, fear can prevent us from seeing the beauty around us.

"If one shuts their eyes
Through all the scary scenes."

~ I have often put proverbial blinders over my eyes to shut out the scary scenes. But one must have their eyes wide open to really see, understand, learn and grow from even the dark side of Life's Coin.

Love, Life, & Light,
EA
Stars


Huan Yi
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7 posted 2005-10-04 02:31 PM



You're getting very good.
With your permission, I would like to
include this in my WORD "Poems By Others"
file, (with a correction of "lose" for "loose").  As Ratleader can tell you,
(as I sent it to him), you'd be in pretty good company.

John

Juju
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In your dreams
8 posted 2005-10-04 06:42 PM


Yes, go ahead.

_Juju

Janette
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9 posted 2005-10-05 08:11 PM


What I fear the most is ... the unknown.

I enjoyed this thought provoking read.  
Great writing here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Juju
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In your dreams
10 posted 2005-10-05 08:19 PM


Yes that is why fear is a dangerous feeling, because it will trap you from the out side and grow in the inside.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

froggy
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11 posted 2005-10-05 09:22 PM


Excellent write.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Ratleader
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12 posted 2005-10-06 09:46 AM


Amen, John -- and this poem just completed my decision to start a compilation like yours...some are simply too good to lose to time and fading synapses.

And oh yes, I can most definitely vouch for your collection -- to be included in it is to be honored.

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Obsidian Snow
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13 posted 2005-10-06 09:51 AM


Enjoyed reading the words and the thoughts behind them.
Juju
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In your dreams
14 posted 2005-10-07 03:49 PM


Thank you for replying, please forgive my tardyness to the reply I have been fairly busy.


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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