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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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My mind lingers, memories dance, colors never fade, Velvet visions, flowing smooth, tender dreams, Laying in silk, I become undone, coverd by thoughts, Soft blankets, of your words, cover my body, With multi colors, only one color, remained, Across my heart, the deepest shade of red, your love, has left me... forever, stained..... "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-04-2005 12:30 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely poem, ARH!  ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jo how sweet of you to say so...thanks! I was just in a romantic mood tonight and I could not refrain from putting it into words. ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the mood fits you well .... it's a great shade of crimson. CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James... I can always count on you to make me smile! you are a sweetheart! thanks! ~ARh  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Craig... What a sweet thing to say, why thank you! Yes, my muse is back from vacation...LOL! ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Ah...Romantic Heart...I have missed your words so. This was another lovely...sensual write! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Crimson footprints...burn in the darkness of the night. Fate selects the brushes... ...indiscriminately. CG |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This kind of writing i have somehow missed, good to see you back again ARH, thank you for sharing.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are! Welcome back, romantic poetess! I love your poems on love! This was beautifully written! Your poetry always oozes emotion and I really feel your words! EA |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I become undone These 3 words alone show the power in this poem. Thanks for sharing it. Tommy |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a very nice poem thankyou for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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