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StevenS
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0 posted 2005-10-03 08:19 PM



I know the sun will shine again,
when these dark clouds drift away.

The rain thats falling on my head,
will just wash my cares away.

I know that in the end,
when the last word has been said.

The orphan children must be loved,
and the hungry must be fed.

I know that every river,
must empty into the sea.

And every door that locks us out,
must surely have a key.

I know that loving someone,
is an arrow in the soul.

If that someone you love,
in your arms you cannot hold.

I know that God must be smiling,
because of fools like you and me.

And I know deep down in my heart,
someday he'll set us free.

To soar up through the clouds,
on majestic eagles wings.

Then great joy will fill our hearts,
when we hear the angels sing.

© Copyright 2005 Steven E. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-10-03 08:46 PM


Steve

Such a positive message!!  I wish I was as sure as you are of all those I knows.  I know that time takes its time, I know I have been patient, and I know there are lots of things that I don't know.     

Sharksbean
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jax
2 posted 2005-10-03 09:10 PM


this is an excellent piece thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

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3 posted 2005-10-03 09:18 PM


What a beautiful uplisting write Steven!
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-10-03 09:44 PM


You keep writing like this...
and you're going to grow yourself
a fan!


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5 posted 2005-10-03 11:21 PM


Lovely. Much enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
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6 posted 2005-10-04 12:00 PM


Steven, this is lovely writing.  Thanks for sharing.   .....jo
LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-10-04 07:31 AM


the greatness in this, is the richness in such positive thought, thank you
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-10-04 07:52 AM


StevenS
Enjoyed this very much.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2005-10-04 09:21 AM



Steven, you have incorporated many fine truisms in this fine write! Beautifully written food for the soul!

I give to you this key that will open any door! Key

Love & Light,
Linda

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10 posted 2005-10-04 11:41 AM


StevenMyFriend~

'I know that every river,
must empty into the sea.

And every door that locks us out,
must surely have a key.'


I love the river reference and knowing that the door has a magical key~

Very smooth ... lovely flow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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