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" Nocturn"
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" Nocturn" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
To wonder of the scope of things when dreaming one begins to write the words to someone elses' song a composition of the night Compiled of someone elses' thoughts who knows just what they want to say yet asks you to collaborate conjoined in spirit in some way To wake and find the words are gone yet still remember having wrote this part of an unfinished song unable to recall a note and so begin another day with something missing from the start quite certain somewhere music plays uncertain of who wrote which part To wonder of the scope of things when dreaming one begins to write anothers' words as parting notes might seem as if they'd come to light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1 True, something I rarely thought about. Enjoyed |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
not bad |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc....This happens to me all the time!!  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Thanks, a recurring theme of mine, perhaps now for more obvious reasons. Doc Huan Yi, Thank you. I did a little research and see you posted a piece entitled "Nocturnal", which I found to be very expressive. I think more research is in order. Martie, Thanks, I think it happens to most of us all the time, I'm only trying to put it into perspective. Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (10-03-2005 08:19 PM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
“Poetry is essentially the soul’s search for its release in language.” Joseph Brodsky |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Compiled of someone elses' thoughts who knows just what they want to say yet asks you to collaborate conjoined in spirit in some way" So, does this mean you were also listening to me talk in my sleep last night?  (since I forgot to write down the dream I had!)  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Huan Yi, This actually began as a dream. I specifically remember writing someone elses' words down, and, offering suggestions as to form and meter. The content was lost on awakening, and, this is what took its' place. Where such things come from is anyones' guess, the "Soul" is as good as any. Myself, I don't have any answers, only questions. Doc Midnitesun, Now, m'dear, if you don't remember, and, I can't recall. I would have to say that it is well within the realm of possibilities. These words could very well have been yours. If no-one else claims them, for what it's worth, I'll swear we co-wrote this piece. Doc |
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