»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #36
»
i have been consumed.
| Open Poetry #36 |
|
i have been consumed. |
|
|
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
|
how can i look at the moon without knowing you lie under it and breathe when no one is there to feel it i know these words and these feelings because i know fire i have been consumed and burned and yet i still strike the match once more can't you tell me that history repeats itself lying here with here tears hardening my face can't you tell me i'll just be engulfed in the flames once more how can i look at the moon without knowing you lie under it and breathe.. |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed. iliana |
||
|
yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Very passionate write! It tells of a sad love song that I've sung many times in my past. I am touched. Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
||
|
Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is pretty good thankyou for sharing this with us  -may the force be with you in poetry |
||
|
Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Very good point there at the end, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
