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ecrivan
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0 posted 2005-10-03 12:22 PM


Once a year
birthday boy wakes up
a clear head guides the senses
morning activities dawn
propensities established
activated


Wake up further
once a year
I can afford to be special
simple happiness with close friends
a piece of cake
morning call for coffee before that
way before the cake and fanfare


Closer to a decent job this year?
nearer to success I mean
where western money buys freedom
never mind the 9 to 5 trudgery
once a year
begins with a morning coffee call
cake and fanfare will ensue
I can afford to be special to friends
afford to make future amends.


Closer to a satisfied heart
ambition at peace with destiny
matters of the heart subdued
that age now supersedes beauty
past youth accepts an older shelter.

Birthday candles are in constant glow
birthday boy lets his wit flow
a day a time, a new measure?
no, year by year at ones leisure.

I can afford to be special
one day...one birthday
a day closer to a finite end
towards frantic future amends.
No wait! why must I invite an end
I haven't yet begun to sing..
let everyday be a festive spirit
an ounce of self-indulgence
something special...





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Martie
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1 posted 2005-10-03 12:28 PM


Martin....is it your birthday today?  Happy birthday!!!  I think you can afford to be special more than just one day a year!!!  Try it!  
ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-10-03 12:37 PM


I took my time on this one it was Oct 2..thanks for reading and your best wishes..I'll update it


iliana
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3 posted 2005-10-03 12:39 PM


Happy Birthday, Martin.  Hope you have many, many happy returns of the day.  We should celebrate our birthdays and be good to ourself by celebrating the gift of life every day.   ....jo
ecrivan
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4 posted 2005-10-03 08:24 AM


Thanks for your best wishes, Ilana


froggy
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5 posted 2005-10-08 06:28 PM


Happy Belated Birthday Martin.
Loved the poem.

:-)

ecrivan
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6 posted 2005-10-09 01:46 AM


thanks Ella, much appreciated


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