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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-02 06:15 PM




If you do the crime
you will do your time
When you cut the fool
You are a fool
When you party downtown
Your wonderful to hang around
When you make a smile
it makes the world go round
So gather up your feet
And enjoy life
even though there are repeats

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
xFromtheHeartx
Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.
1 posted 2005-10-02 09:26 PM


awsome poem laura! you need to show timmy and danny this LMAO


sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
2 posted 2005-10-03 08:18 AM


LOL This is real good and funny. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-10-03 08:40 AM


Good morning, Laura.

Your thinking cap is in fine form this day! ~ and may this day be a joyful one.

Tender-hearted hug
EA

Sharksbean
Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
4 posted 2005-10-03 12:40 PM


this is nice thanks for sharing   (big warm huggses)ps. lovee that cute little puppy(hugs)

-may the force be with you in poetry

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