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ice
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0 posted 2005-10-02 01:06 PM


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Painting by Edward Hicks-(American Quaker)
Title-"The peaceable Kingdom"-1848
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­Search....search...researching
Seeking visions in a modern world,
Where all spirits seem entangled
In snares of popular illusion;

I find some clarity by
My fingertips touching,
My eyes deciphering,
Messages in an old painting...
***********************
Sky clearing allows sun in-on
Clean water, on-to a place
Without corners
That no one really owns-
A place without boundary,
Where stewards bow to one master  
A space, surreal, a heaven known.

Comparted, but nearly touching
Enough so, as their paths cross
Each and each retain appointed slots.
Space enough to live and play
Under eyes (lit up by grace)

A peaceable kingdom

Where all can find rest,
Between rigors of chase.

Human children, lambs and leopards,
A painted scene, of  living subjects-
Framed in Isaiah paraphrase;

Wolf and goat-kid, bear-cub-tigers
All around them, golden light
Not from bulb or burning star-
But glow uprising from their hearts

Ascending arteries,
Illuminating all in sight
Through fiber optics
Of Gods eyes...

A tree divides, held out-
Palms up,
Lifted into holy light
That sheds its gold
On branch and child,
Dusting Devon hide.

Nearby:

Puzzled by the bears strange meal,
The lion fixes willful eyes, a metaphor
For those congressed
Across a dark divide-discussing
Promises, etched on charts
That show upon their carta...men
Ignoring fright of change,
By filling in the great abyss with inner light.

© Copyright 2005 ford hume - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-10-02 01:13 PM


This is a well thought of poem, thanks for sharing this and I like the picture..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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2 posted 2005-10-02 01:19 PM


*smiling at you*..Magnificent!!

I'm placing this masterpiece into my library
for a when I have more time to take it all in.
And may I congratulate you also on becoming a Member Elite!

There is so much one can learn from you..
pure poetry this...pure poetry!!

Thank you for your wonderful critique on my poem The Woman's Portrait.  
Your thoughts and time are very much appreciated.

Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

ice
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3 posted 2005-10-02 01:26 PM


Thank You, Angel..
*  *  *  *  *  *  *
The painting is a bit unclear in parts, I think I need to explain a few things about it...

The theme of the painting, and also my poem is fundamental Quaker beliefs (my own, not all)

Hicks was inspired by the book of Isaiah, I was inspired by his painting.

The Englismen on the left side, include William Penn, making treaty with the Indian people, the only treaty signed and its promises kept by both sides, to my knowledge..

I hope this explains a few things, but if anyone has any other questions about the content, please ask.....

Peace-------ice
       ><>


Martie
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4 posted 2005-10-02 02:16 PM


Ford.....I want to live in that painting!  Thanks for explaining a bit...it's hard to see the small people and what they are doing in the background.  A very lovely belief of the goodness and beauty and compatibility of all creatures great and small.  I really enjoyed your poem!  
froggy
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5 posted 2005-10-02 02:30 PM


Ford,
  This is just as beautiful as it was last night when you showed it to me.

:-)

ice
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6 posted 2005-10-02 02:46 PM


Nancy, Martie, Ella....

Thank you for reading and the very kind replies...

The picture is too small... but I have just learned how to get it here at all, thank you Nancy for the help in Q&A...

Now all I have to do is learn how to enlarge the photos without making them too big...

A much larger picture of the painting can be found here, also a bit of history about the artist..
http://www2.gol.com/users/quakers/Hicks_Peaceable_Kingdom.htm

again, thank you all..

----------ice/ford
   ><>


Martie
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7 posted 2005-10-02 02:51 PM


Thanks for the link, Ford!
iliana
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8 posted 2005-10-02 03:13 PM


Ford, I loved the lines:  

"Ascending arteries,
Illuminating all in sight
Through fiber optics
Of Gods eyes..."

Actually, loved the whole poem.  That last verse...yes, that last verse....an answer to the question I posed in my poem (Bombing Eden)....thank you.   .....jo

scorpio
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9 posted 2005-10-02 04:56 PM


Wonderfully written Ford.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2005-10-03 07:21 AM


When one takes into account the historical nature of this piece, your own adapation to history makes it all that much more interesting...

Thank you, Ford!

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2005-10-03 09:05 AM



As in the Kingdom of Heaven, may there be peace on Earth between all creatures great and small!

Not only was I intrigued by your poem, I was fascinated by your explanation!

Love & Light,
Linda

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