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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-01 06:20 PM



Her skin was brown and gently laid upon my emotions
Touching lightly deeply knowingly inquisiat

Her skin was white and fluffly laid upon my feelings
Snuggling widely deeply knowingly knowing

Her hair was upon my shoulder and demanding upon my feelings
Touching songs deep within knowing passion

Her essence was within me and a long road was finally conquered
Touching desire narrowly targeted knowing relief

Her night was long within a feeling that in her smile and laughter
Touching a passion without feeling

In passion in feelings memories are long and feelings do not leave nor memories


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2005-10-02 04:55 AM


Beautifully written.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-10-03 11:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
iliana
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3 posted 2005-10-03 11:57 PM


"In passion in feelings memories are long and feelings do not leave nor memories"

Oh, so true. Lovely write, Bodger.  


Sharksbean
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jax
4 posted 2005-10-04 12:54 PM


this is so beautiful Bodger thanks for sharing, and heres a question, why the name bodger

-may the force be with you in poetry

[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (10-05-2005 01:22 PM).]

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5 posted 2005-12-12 07:48 AM


memories
nice one dave

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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