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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Beneath Beneath a sky of pink and blue Where flowers break the link with hue And butterflies of breeze of toss Assaults the heart and minds emboss I wonder in its ecstasy A phantom in a fantasy A spirit in a soundless pass That stepped a moment through the glass To stand for sooth just beyond Reality and truth of bond A moment wing of passing through A parallel of being you A feeling of beyond express A touch of life beyond confess A metaphor of flying words That flies much further then the birds Dimensions light of purity A link a winks eternity |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir, your a real blessing this am  My spirit will rise |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful blend of words, feelings and images in this write Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Each day, as I read you, I am often struck by this thought - 'A feeling of beyond express' You word-weave so deftly ... and we are blessed to be baptised in the ink of you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are making up for lost time, thank you. scorpio Thank you my friend. Marge And you are a sweetheart.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I think this is near to breathtaking! But after the pause breath comes again and seems deeper actually because of the depth it has caught. A hug for you dear Seymour. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "To stand for sooth just beyond Reality and truth of bond A moment wing of passing through A parallel of being you" I often feel this same way...thank you for the expression of it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita So glad you liked this so much. Martie Thank you for being you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now that is a wonderful cup of tea you just served up, Sy! .....jo |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Well written and I love alot of the thought you put in this, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It's good to see this writing and style again It is almost timeless Bodger |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you for trying my tea. Angelheart How about another slice tomorrow. LOL Bodger Thank you for the read and comment. |
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