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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-10-01 02:57 AM



Tantalizing isn't it
Amazing
Soul searching show
Hear see read my writing
Listen as I say

This writing here for you
Can you hear?
Its important
Break through the death
Get focused, believe

Imagine the world stopped
Head implosion
And its real
You can feel it
Don't stop, don't think

Slower the feet
Higher the fall
Running from the bullet
Quick steps pause
And here is the living death

Get off
Its gone
Laughing
The brightest sun
Remember and never forget

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-01 03:56 AM


praise god, the creator, not one wanting world control, the beast, computer is quite a beast isnt is.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sharksbean
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jax
2 posted 2005-10-02 02:51 PM


very good poem thanks for sharing
Angelheart
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3 posted 2005-10-02 05:38 PM


very well written, thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-10-03 08:48 PM


Thank you guys.  I was hanging out with my friend at IHOP, and in the midst of our discussion the word "off" came to mind.  So I grabbed a paper table mat, flipped it over, and wrote "off."  Glad you like it.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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