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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-10-01 12:58 PM



~cricket songs~

night’s harmonies
capture the ear

to hear

silent sighs of a heartbeat

breathe, breathe deeply

absorb the feel of fresh
sinking into flesh

and sing
your heart out



© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2005-10-01 04:41 AM


Lovely one!  LOL....I can't believe I didn't see this before I posted my most recent one (Cica(2))Repost....we must be on a similar wave length tonite, Kacy!   ....jo
kayjay
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2 posted 2005-10-01 09:30 AM


Some time ago I wrote about a cricket I could no longer hear. /pip/Forum64/HTML/001861.html  My audio range seems to be shrinking a bit.  
Nonetheless, your voice with hope found in a cricket's song is a great wake up this morning. Hugs Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-10-01 09:35 AM


A touch of Summer in your lovely song makes me long for those nightly tunes of crickets.  When you still hear them it means the air is clean indeed.

Beautiful!


Love,
Margherita

ice
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4 posted 2005-10-01 10:33 AM


...play on, left leg, a bow
the right one, drawn-tight, a wire;

Making a crickets harmony.

Violins are these,
Sounding in
Your written thoughts-
In which
A metaphor
Of Natures,
Famous music
Rises up;

Your ink becoming strings.

enjoyed...to say the least

----------ice/ford
   ><>


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-10-01 12:51 PM


Kacy~
I just got hit in the 'solar plexus' ... I LOVE the cricketed songs of the night~
This brings them singing right back to me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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