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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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0 posted 2005-12-19 05:41 PM



Love Poem for Her Easy Ears


My eyes shuttered at your radiant smile.
That’s why I loved you.
That’s “Loved”, I said.

I loved you for a while.
That is true.
But I wasn’t right in the head.

You said you loved my graceful vocabulary.
You melted for my rhymes.
My poesy brought you to joyful tears.

But now I am solitary,
And that is fine.
Because I found out that you have easy ears!

© Copyright 2005 Edward Grant - All Rights Reserved
majnu
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1 posted 2005-12-19 05:49 PM


caress with one hand and slap with the other?

nicely done.

-majnu
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tatalinia
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2 posted 2005-12-19 05:51 PM


good writing.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Toerag
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3 posted 2005-12-19 06:19 PM


enjoyed the write Ed....I'll try to find some of my old ones                                                                        

OwlSA
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4 posted 2005-12-20 10:00 AM


Sad, but clever!

- Owl

Kaoru
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5 posted 2005-12-20 05:22 PM


Easy ears, eh? I get it.
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