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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-30 06:18 PM



Shiney didn't choose he enjoyed the dark for the peace it gave him and not having to go home - shiney enjoyed time out of the cage that humans call human

Shiney learned to look and to dream

Shiney had a flat head
Well he couldn't always duck them

He look at people for wallets and he never knew what to do with them

Someone else would know

But in the world that you build

'Shiney had seen and watched most things of life you treasure' in ways

For the Shiney
Who remembers tomorrow
And will be there

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-09-30 06:46 PM


Bodger....your word portrait of Shiney touched my heart.
Bodger
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2 posted 2005-09-30 07:13 PM


And Shiney still lives as long

As someone can

Live from him

Bodger

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3 posted 2005-10-01 12:30 PM


interesting?

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-10-01 01:34 PM


Now, dear bodger, this hurts ... you moved me to tears.

Love,
Margherita

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-10-01 03:51 PM


It moved me to admiration

Like a 'real' street kid he kept his mind, focused on what he could do, learnt faster and faster

Victoria England with the Dodger and Oliver Twist was always real and probably always will be as the scene setting somewhere

Bodger

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6 posted 2005-10-01 04:18 PM


Bodger
Enjoyed the read.

Bodger
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7 posted 2005-10-01 04:22 PM


Thanks Seymoure

Bodger

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