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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-30 04:57 PM



It was a sudden night everything about us no words
Some would seek spirits to arise from a sandy beach
And then to complain when one arises in your gut
But you are male and mail and your protection wasn't on
And in your gut is an image that you didn't protect against

A sandy cove wasn't your desire it was just sand sea and vision with escape
And you cared


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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2005-09-30 04:59 PM


I enjoyed this one.  There's no protection against caring, and that's a good thing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Bodger
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2 posted 2005-09-30 05:13 PM


Thanks Pilgrim

Words were to change things on their head and then ask

Did you

Bodger

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3 posted 2005-10-01 12:07 PM


hey D good to read ya
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-10-01 12:09 PM


lol at that did you Q

but what a cool write!

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