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Open Poetry #36

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Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

0 posted 2005-09-30 09:43 AM

Yesterday I wanted it all
Did I tell you?
It was so long ago
No one cushioned the fall

Whispering into my hand
On days when I can’t bare
To let anyone hear my desperation
This failure so unplanned

Taking solace from my corner
Of an empty room
With shadows that sing
The song of continuance mourner

Reluctance devours progression
Stagnant, stillness
Becomes an obsession

Colors fade
As movement ceases
Reality is over played

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-09-30 09:49 AM

very nicely done Obsidian Snow keep up the good work

-may the force be with you in poetry

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-09-30 11:50 AM

I know ... sometimes it happens just like this.

But the light always calls us back into LIFE!

Very well rendered "mood of the night"!

Love,
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-09-30 12:51 PM

Obsidian,
Another enjoyable read.

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