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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-09-30 09:21 AM

Silk Crinkle

with one touch
you changed me
my heart ran
completely liquid red
and flowed to a place
beneath my skin
altering
my every breaths existence
now forever
I wear you
like a tattoo

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2005-09-30 09:36 AM

*smile* Nicely done!

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-09-30 09:41 AM

thats just so sweet thanks for sharing this it was great

-may the force be with you in poetry

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

3 posted 2005-09-30 09:45 AM

Tattoo's can be covered.

Significant depth and character in your words.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-09-30 11:21 AM

SweetOneSlickLady~

I LOVE IT !!!!!

I just love it~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-09-30 11:25 AM

1slick_lady
Lol now you are stuck with it. Enjoyed

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2005-09-30 05:06 PM

Wow, H...You always leave me feeling inferior...

You humble me.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-09-30 05:21 PM

Excellent Helen....perfect!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-09-30 10:57 PM

Yup....that's our Helen. Awesome!!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-09-30 11:20 PM

Love the title and its elaboration!

....jo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2005-09-30 11:44 PM

Helen, I loved the contrasting imagery
I see...the smoothness of silk, against something that might crinkle~velvet-like~

~this write is smooth as silk, soft as velvet~ thank you!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2005-10-01 12:19 PM

true artistry!!

a definite addiction!

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

12 posted 2005-10-03 12:51 PM

you and your poetry are beautiful

Love this, Lady Helen.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

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