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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-29 07:42 PM





The Lord was here for me
He showed me the way
The way to my destiny
My destiny to a miracle

My first depression about
my soon-to-become best friend
we are back together as friends


When I went to school today
I prayed and I prayed
then the bell rung for school to start
I bumped into someone

It was the person that was mad at me
she gave me a big hug
and said things were going to be ok


We are talking again
I am so glad to be her friend
My gloominess is going away
I am now ok

Now for a miracle kiss

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2005-09-29 09:20 PM


Laura!
I puckered up and look what I got. You silly girl. That was fun.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angelheart
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Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-29 09:22 PM


Larry C~  Thanks for your response, LOL thats what you get, See in the beginning I just wanted to make things sounds gloomy and religious and then at the end, make a laugh. glad it took effect on you

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
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jax
3 posted 2005-09-29 11:02 PM


This was very touching and funny. Glad you two are friends again (big warm mutant lobster huggs)

-may the force be with you in poetry

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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4 posted 2005-09-30 01:40 PM


This is so cute. It made me laugh when I saw that monkey face at the end. LMAO Keep up the great poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-09-30 02:34 PM


hey Laura,

I am so glad this all worked out for you....true friendship is a rare thing....it looks as though your prayers were answered....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-09-30 03:36 PM



Besides being an angel, you're a trixie pixie! I near fell off my cloud when I came to that monkey with the lucious lips! I had to kiss her!

I am so pleased that you got over your "first depression" so quickly! May any others that you may have along your way in life, be lifted so readily!

Life's good!

Loveya, Dear One!

EA

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
7 posted 2005-09-30 07:37 PM


Angelheart your poems are always a delight! How did you get a picture of my X?
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-09-30 09:47 PM


Just so adorable...I'm glad you and your friend are okay now.
AND I love the monkey!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MGROVES
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california
9 posted 2005-10-01 07:36 AM


great pic glad for you. i visited a friend today, i was angry at, and had hurt feelings from her behavior towords me, but i am glad i stopped by, i am sorry for thoughts and words of stupidity. hope she forgives me. she too deserves better in life.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2005-10-01 10:00 AM


Uplifting and wise message lovingly presented!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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