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Left Behind |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Sitting 'round talking about love, boyfriends and gossip how I want to be part of their group left behind, am I nice? do I offend? A Day goes by and I'm a fool not a day goes by where I wish I was them sitting alone, got friendship, love and lonelyness on my mind left behind On my own now stuck with me,I ask again am I nice? do I please? Am I happy with just me? left behind, all alone stuck in this world with an empty heart Overwhelemed with my life I don't have any strife Hiding behind my fears I'm left behind "Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
beautifully written thank you for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Use what you have, discard what was wrong Talent is there You are there Remember it Bodger |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
yes bodger is right on that and you will get somewhere, just take things in steps and you will be alright Poetry can get you very far |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Sometimes I somewhat regret reading poetry, cause I realize how I relate to stuff I wish I didn't relate to. You don't have to be left behind though. Sometimes it's a choice. Jesus loves you. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks, bless you all here on pip My spirit will rise |
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