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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2005-09-29 01:03 PM

Southern breeze stirs
on a blow by wind
causing old memories to rise;

and then

I see the twinkle, and hear the smile
{still}     you haunt through distant miles

of time, and space
of then, and now;

your presence, your voice...

    I can feel you
            somehow

touching my soul,
my life; once again.

Remind me gently,
Oh southern wind.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

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Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2005-09-29 01:19 PM

And you reach a lot of people as well

Southern Wind

Bodger

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-09-29 01:28 PM

GentlestOne~
Oh yes ... such a memory-moving wind it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

noles1@totcon.com

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

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Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-29 01:37 PM

very nice, creative write, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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Florida, USA

4 posted 2005-09-29 01:50 PM

Very beautiful, Donna.....
And as gentle ad you are!!
Hugs,
Ethel

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

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jax

5 posted 2005-09-29 02:35 PM

this is beautiful beyond words thank you for sharing this excellent piece looking foward to more

-may the force be with you in poetry

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-09-29 02:36 PM

Beautiful Donna...
As gentle as an Autumn's breeze.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Martie

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7 posted 2005-09-29 02:53 PM

Donna

So softly you bring the wind. We have wind too, Santa Ana winds...hot and dry and dangerous because of fire. Still, I love the wind!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

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8 posted 2005-09-30 07:50 AM

just stoppin in quickly to say thanks all

Obsidian Snow
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9 posted 2005-09-30 10:05 AM

The artisic rhythm and rhyme speaks to the reader.

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2005-09-30 11:34 AM

now you knew this would grab me....being from the south....Hi Donna this is beautiful, may the Southern winds always flow to you....

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

11 posted 2005-09-30 11:42 AM

Gentle spirit flows in these beautiful lines of deep longing.

Love,
Margherita

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