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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2005-09-29 07:25 AM



a 62 one owner, never owned
and only partially possessed
passion powered you say

and do I like the feel
of the ride with my eyes
when your wax is on elegant

and your chrome has been attended
with intentions of slow drives
downtown under the lover’s lights

you say you worry about later
what if you are alone on the floor
will god still brush the dust

from the flawless of your metals

__________

dark

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2005-09-29 09:24 AM


sounds like quite a lady...
dust is just a disquise...

K

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2005-09-29 09:37 AM


ms K...some of those classic vehicles just unzip such images in my mindway..thanks lady friend
Martie
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3 posted 2005-09-29 11:55 AM


DS

"a 62 one owner, never owned
and only partially possessed
passion powered you say"

I've seen her pass by a few times.  


Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
4 posted 2005-09-29 03:02 PM


one word "nice"

-may the force be with you in poetry

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