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Tim
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0 posted 2005-09-29 12:12 PM


Once I cried
when someone died
but that was lives ago
a different time
a distant time
someone I used to know
it was if
a rug was shaken
and from its fibers slung
upon the winds
its very soul
to parts unknown
forsaken
now
I know not
of who he was
his
memory forgotten
all I know
is long ago
in a different time
a distant time
once
he
I was begotten.

© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-09-29 12:16 PM


"Once I cried"

Me too, Tim....more than once!!  

iliana
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2 posted 2005-09-29 01:42 AM


Oh, wow, Tim, this is a great write!
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3 posted 2005-09-29 10:00 AM


Tim~
Oh wow ... you've now got me shaking some rugs of memory~

it was if
a rug was shaken
and from its fibers slung
upon the winds
its very soul'


These memories though ... they know me still~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

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4 posted 2005-11-22 08:55 AM


Life is a living thing itself, and it seems we must water it with a tear a day....one each day for every part that's growing.

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