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30 Years
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30 Years |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hopefully on my time area I am not breaking the third posting rule as it is now 02:57. But I am breaking a repeat on this Thirty Years Thirty years I’ve traipsed these boards The dust still looks the same I raised my voice in anger But people were just the same They came to hear King Harry Or Richard Or in Vain My voice was there For them Everytime I swear it was not the same Now an old dresser Keeping my master clean Fighting with his odd moods The things that are not seen I keep him dressed For every part And hear his voice anew As he fight’s his Richard His back humped and sword threw But still the dust remains the same No matter how they sweep it And still my heart throbs to say I was MacBeth and beat it |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What an interesting write! Going back for a second read...really got my imagination stirred.  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks I've written more versions of this than I care to remember and went back to the first. Many thanks Bodger |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bodger...Much enjoyed!!! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
quite often that happens with a write... I enjoyed this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But still the dust remains the same No matter how they sweep it And still my heart throbs to say I was MacBeth and beat it" ~ Fabulous ending! ~ and I liked what came before it as well!  Love & Light, EA |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I write I suppose on anything It is nice to know someone actually shared what I thought at one time was just my nonsense Bodger |
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