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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Sitting 'round talking about love, boyfriends and gossip how I want to be part of their group left behind, am I nice? do I offend? A Day goes by and I'm a fool not a day goes by where I wish I was them sitting alone, got friendship, love and lonelyness on my mind left behind On my own now stuck with me,I ask again am I nice? do I please? Am I happy with just me? left behind, all alone stuck in this world with an empty heart Overwhelemed with my life I don't have any strife Hiding behind my fears I'm left behind "Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
I don't think anyone noticed how most of my poems expressed the same emotions over and over again.DOn't you think so ? I'm not sure if any of you out there have read what I've put out there.. I know I didn't put in alot of poems..so ..I dunno "Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
pretty good poem.but whyd ya post the same thing twice? -may the force be with you in poetry |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I don't think I have read this before. This poem reflects a place where many of us have been at one time or another. It gets better...it does. Just hang in there. Hanging in there is part of the answer.  ....jo |
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