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RennieandBoo
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since 2003-09-02
Posts 47
Florida!

0 posted 2005-09-28 08:40 PM



I want to be me again
I want to feel again
I miss  happiness
I miss my emotions

Too serious
Too mysterious
Not many friends
Not many beliefs

Stuck in this wreteched world
No maturity
No love is given to me
Too used  to not being me

No one's gonna save
Me
Only myself
Stuck in this body
I don't need nobody now

"Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken"
Evanesence; Hello

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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-09-28 09:46 PM


We all need someone

Even if at times

It is ourself

Thought words

Bodger

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since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2005-09-29 11:58 AM


Well I tell you what?  If this is a "just a poem" fine, but if you feel that way, it is only temporary trust me.  I felt like an ugly duckling once, and to be honest with you, now I puff up my feathers as one of the most beautiful swans around.  Time, maturity, and a sense of self change that in one, and make you realize all the beauty that each of us have been given lies inside.   Wishing you love, and love of self.

To see real beauty - look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-09-29 06:45 PM


Bless your heart.  You're definitely on the right track...to be who you are is most important.  This write shows maturity. Good write.   ....jo
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