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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-28 06:40 PM

Talk to me

Talk as words move you

Talk to me

I was years away taking time I needed

Talked to me of years gone

Talk to me

In the moment I lost

Talk

In the words I lost

I lost

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-09-28 07:47 PM

Oh, so many of us
surely know this...

the lost dream...

the lost seem...

the moment
we should have,
but didn't...

all in
the words I lost.

Thank you, Bodger

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-09-28 08:15 PM

Very powerful notes here.
Just knodding and smiling as I re-read...
Great write.
TD

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-09-28 09:12 PM

I write and forget I suppose

I have always loved the position on Piptalk of being able within limit to just write words that I want to and know they are recorded.

Whether they are read is another matter.

At some point they will come together but that is far in the future.

Thank you for comments

Bodger

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-09-29 06:58 AM

Hey Bodger

this made me wonder of sorts, if things did in fact happen as they were supposed, but we humans, stomp our feet and act out, as children, b/c it didn't happen as we wanted, yet, perhaps destiny knows better? Hugs for a great write.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2005-09-29 07:10 AM

Like the way this was expressed , I found my voice when I began writing

Hope

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2005-09-29 09:11 PM

This makes me really sad. Love the write though!

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

7 posted 2005-09-29 11:20 PM

Congrats on an excellent piece my friend

-may the force be with you in poetry

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-09-30 12:00 PM

You're on to something here, Bodger. Interesting subject and approach.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

9 posted 2005-09-30 01:12 PM

I think you are all too kind

Still Sunny Wigan beckons for Monday and I am looking forward to it

Bodger

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-10-01 12:35 PM

interesting words as usuall. as long as words get seen. doestnt matter if taken or not from another. as long as others hear the words. take care

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

11 posted 2005-10-01 04:28 PM

Thanks Marsha

I drive up tomorrow

Bodger

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2005-12-12 07:53 AM

drive up? where?

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

DejaEntendu
Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 82
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2005-12-12 09:02 PM

good write, something anyone can relate to. well done.
thank you

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