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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2005-09-28 03:40 PM


Love’s Trap
By Paul Wilson


Memories of special times shared
dreams of forever fill your mind
Unselfishly you gave me your heart
A truer love I’ll never find

We danced under Luna’s soft glow
and made love on blankets of stars
From May thru July we shared all
I healed your broken heart and scars

I took all you had too offer
and played my part in this love game
Cupid’s arrow pierced your heart
my feelings for you not the same

A broken heart and shattered dreams
memories you’d rather forget
You fell for the lines I fed you
I almost fell for you I admit

I got what I wanted from you
and gave nothing back in return
When you play loves game remember
there are many lesson to learn

I set the trap for you my dear
hoping you would fall into it
I didn’t see the signs from you
to my trap you wouldn’t commit

The table has been turned on me
like a fool I fell in love with you
You took what you needed from me
leaving my heart broken into



~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul


[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-29-2005 04:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-09-28 04:23 PM


tis is a very nice write thank you for sharing this

-may the force be with you in poetry

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2 posted 2005-09-28 05:25 PM


oh the game of love....it just aches sometimes.....

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There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
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3 posted 2005-09-29 04:16 AM


sharksbean...Thanks so much for taking time too read and reply...Paul

Greeneyes...You are so right, sometimes the trapper gets trapped. Thanks for understanding and for your reply...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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4 posted 2005-09-29 06:49 AM


Lucky are the ones who win in this game, Paul. It's a rough game to play indeed. Nicely penned.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2005-09-29 10:27 AM


Kit...So nice too hear from you.
You are so right, love is a very delicate situation. Some people treat it as a game but someone always gets hurt because of it.
Thanks for the read and your reply. Best Wishes to you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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6 posted 2005-09-29 01:50 PM


Paul~
What a heartrendering message~

I'm pleased to count myself among the many
that so enjoy reading you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

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7 posted 2005-09-29 02:41 PM


Too bad someone has to get hurt in the end..
You wrote this well Paul.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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8 posted 2005-09-30 07:12 AM


Marge...So glad you enjoyed this and really appreciate you taking time too read and for all the help you give me...Paul

Nancy...You are so right. It seems like someone always gets hurt. Thanks for understanding...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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9 posted 2005-11-21 02:04 AM


In love...our traps trap us, every time! No worries though, it's a BIG club.....

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