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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-09-28 06:41 AM


Wordlings:

I bundle the feelings that dwell deep,
not wanting them to fall out of touch with reality.

The worth of you flames my being,
flickering thoughts to wax the evening sacred.

Distance torments, bridging time with
empty promises to fill the quiet mornings.

It's a season of change, of  leavings
and the kisses of yesterday, to tempt the tomorrows.

It's the awakening of silent dreams
and "once upons~~" to provide those magical moments...

When words become actions and the traces of yesterday
become footprints to tomorrow.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-09-28 07:11 AM


quote:
It's the awakening of silent dreams
and "once upons~~" to provide those magical moments...

When words become actions and the traces of yesterday
become footprints to tomorrow.





Absolutely beautiful, dear Maureen!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
2 posted 2005-09-28 09:12 AM


nakedthoughts, These will be the thoughts I carry with me into this new day. "When words become actions and the traces of yesterday become the footprints of tomrrow." Words so beautiful in their gentleness, so powerful in their resolve. Thank you, theres a mountian just waiting for my footprints. And today I'm Walking!  :-)
Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
3 posted 2005-09-28 12:56 PM


this is a beautiful poem thank you for sharing:-D

-may the force be with you in poetry

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2005-09-28 01:00 PM


Maureen
Better words a better green.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2005-09-28 05:29 PM


Very nice, Maureen! Miss you.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2005-09-28 06:39 PM


"The worth of you flames my being,
flickering thoughts to wax the evening sacred."

Gorgeous writing, Maureen.  Loved the title.   ....jo

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
7 posted 2005-09-28 06:41 PM


You like a girl on something

Bodger

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