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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2005-09-27 11:28 PM

The story was simple:
Katrina loved Jazz...
The cymbals, the sax
Were all merely symbols.
The eye of the eagle
Met the eye of the storm.
The cry of the people
For the city deformed
Was the new wave of sound
That rose up to drown-
Out the drums and the bass.
She was dazzled and dazed
By the blues, by the riffs
Of the weeping guitars,
By the crumbling roofs,
And the howling alarms,
By New Orleans in water -
By this modern Atlantis
That was soaked in a tear
And washed off the atlas,
By the scene on the canvas
Where the clouds were smeared.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (09-29-2005 07:03 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-09-27 11:29 PM

Deep thought here....good write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-09-28 06:21 AM

The skyline is bruised.
New colors are smeared
And splashed on the canvas.

Great verse especially enjoyed!

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-09-28 10:34 AM

I appreciate your work, it's touching and well written.

Love,
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-09-28 11:10 AM

Master
Enjoyed the read.

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

5 posted 2005-09-28 12:48 PM

my heart goes out to NewOrleans. thank you for sharing.

-may the force be with you in poetry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-09-28 08:04 PM

Nice writing...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-09-28 08:27 PM

An enjoyable read.
Katrina didn't drown the New Orleans spirit. Already, I see signs of the artists and musicians revealing the heart and soul of it back out for the world to see and hear.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2005-09-29 11:53 AM

Katrina loved Blues...
A new wave of sound
Was rising to drown-
Out the drums and the bass...

This was just an incredibly accurate account of the greed of that hurricane. So great to see your work again, you have been missed sorely.

To see real beauty - look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-09-29 12:07 PM

Haven't seen your work gracing these blue pages for quite some time.
You've come back with a very fine, ~ and timely, piece of poetry. Very well done!

EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-09-29 12:51 PM

Excellent excellent piece of work!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

11 posted 2005-09-29 05:55 PM

Thank you all... I've revised it a bit. What do you think?

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2005-09-29 06:19 PM

Andrey~
I didn't see it before you revised it ... but I know what is poignantly perfect ... and this certainly is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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